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剑15‘拍了拍’你：官方真题做了吗

在之前的文章系列中，KK老师从趋势预测的角度，给大家详解了剑15的小作文和大作文，以及书后范文给到我们的备考方向。今天我就要带大家来再往下走一层，看看面对具体题目我们需要注意些什么。

广告还有影响力吗?

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

这是剑15 Test 3的大作文考题。

广告/媒体是雅思考试中的一个常规话题，历年考过的考察角度包括：广告的利弊，针对孩子的广告，应该怎么约束广告等。

所以很多同学在看到“Advertising”这个关键词的时候，嘴角会扬起一丝微笑，然后条件反射似的，将自己背过的答案——广告操控人们，广告显示的不真实，广告创造一种消费文化等等，堆砌在纸上。

然而如果这样去展开，这篇文章就妥妥地陷入“偏题”。因为人家问的是“广告是否对人有影响力”，而你答的全是“广告为什么不好”。

其实观察最近出题趋势，无论是剑15还是真题回忆，我们发现，在大家熟悉的话题之下(还是那些教育、工作、社会、媒体、环境等等)，常常考察一些比较不那么“熟悉”的角度。

这些角度非常刁钻，先给大家喂一勺蜜糖：啊呀，这个话题我准备过!殊不知其实是一剂毒药：等到你迫不及待把prepared answer写满一张纸才发现，诶，好像哪里不对，好像隐约觉得，题目问的其实不是这个。

所以拿到题目之后，我们来做的第一件事，先弄清楚在问什么。比如拿到一个discussion讨论题型，不要只是读一遍“有的人这样想，有的人那样想”，一定要将题目中双方争论的问题概括出来。

例如前面的广告题目，我们可以试着这样去概括“他们争论的是广告对人到底有没有影响力”。

那么我们可以围绕着这几个问题去展开brainstorming：

1.广告的影响力很大吗，体现在哪里，广告通过什么策略实现这种影响力的?

2.广告没什么影响力，对谁来说，这是一个最新的变化吗，为什么会这样呢?

现在去构思以上问题的答案，再组织起来写在自己的文章里，就不会产生方向性的错误了。

其实在议论文中，有三种基本的问题，在回答这些问题并给出自己观点的时候，也相应会形成三种不一样的claim观点。

第一种是Claim of fact，这一种观点是在回答“是不是”的问题。比如“你觉得现在的广告对人有影响吗”，回答是或者不是。

第二种是Claim of Value，这一种观点是在回答“好不好”的问题，价值判断，比如“你觉得广告对人是积极还是消极影响”。

最后一种是Claim of policy，这一种观点是在回答“该不该”的问题，评估怎么做，怎么解决问题，比如“该不该禁止针对儿童的广告”。

雅思写作的话题众多，然后千变万化，核心的观点类型无非就是这三种：讨论事实，讨论价值，讨论方法。

学会了吗?来练习一下：

Nowadays, people can shop, work and communicate with others via the Internet. They do not need to do these face-to-face. Is this a positive or negative development?

要回答这个题目，我们的思考方向是“人们依赖网络的利和弊”

More people are using mobile phones and computers to communicate. Therefore people are losing the ability to communicate with each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

再来看这个问题，乍一看和上面那个是不是很像?但注意题目中的结论是“因为网络，人们正在失去面对面交流的能力”，这显然是一个事实fact，因此思考的方向是“人们有没有失去这种能力，为什么”。

所以呀，同学们现在明白了吗，哪怕在题目中看到很熟悉的关键字，也要多思考一分钟，用老师教的方法想一想，它到底想问什么。

在写作中，语法、词汇、句型缺一不可，但逻辑和思路才是根本～

2017年11月25日雅思写作真题大作文7分范文

题目为：As major cities around the world are growing fast and many problems occur. What are the problems that young people live in cities are caused by continued growth? What solutions do you suggest?城市扩张给城市里的年轻人带来了哪些问题，如何解决这些问题?范文来自唐老雅。下文范文自取：

解析：本周雅思作文问的是城市扩张给城市里的年轻人带来了哪些问题，如何解决这些问题?

城市扩张，意味着越来越多的年轻人涌入城市，这会带来什么样的问题?其实，稍微想一下，我们就能发现各种可能的问题，比如就业压力，住房压力，交通拥堵，城市安全，子女教育等等。至于解决办法，无非是政府扩大就业机会，重视年轻人再教育问题，甚至限制年轻人进入大城市等等。总体来说，本周题目的难度并不大，这类问题也是我们平时都经常讨论和思考的，因此，本周作文比拼的可能还是在语言表达方面。

7分雅思写作真题大作文范文：

Now it seems that all the big cities around the world are still endlessly expanding. The population of Shanghai, for example, was just 10 million in 1990s, yet today the figure has soared up to 30 million. The cosmopolitan expansion means that more people, young people in particular, are rushing into the big cities and this may cause a host of problems.

The first problem that faces the young people in big cities is that a good job will become increasingly difficult to come by since the competition in the job market will surely intensify as young people, most of whom are well educated, decide to pursue their dreams in the big cities. It is now not uncommon that a university position may attract more than 100 applicants. Secondly, as these young people settle down in the big cities, they will soon have their own family, which will impose great pressure on the city’s housing. In fact, this is exactly one of the major reasons why housing in the big cities today is so expensive. Then, when their children reach the school age, they will find it hard to get them into school, because the educational resources are very limited. Finally, a large number of young people living under great pressure in the big cities may bring about such social problems as unemployment and crimes.

To solve these problems, I would suggest that the government take measures to limit the number of people migrating into the big cities. In fact, cities like New York and Beijing have already set standards for those who want to come in. Meanwhile, it is highly advisable that the government offer practical programs so that the young people living in the big cities can receive further education to make them more competitive in the job market. The most essential thing that the government should do, of course, is develop a strong economy, which is the most effective cure for the diseases in the big cities.(332 words)

本范文可借鉴的表达

Soar up 飙升

A host of 许多 (=many)

Come by 获得;得到

Not uncommon 不罕见

Impose...on... 强加......在......身上

Set standards 制定标准

2017年11月25日雅思真题写作大作文高分范文

题目是：As major cities around the world are growing fast and many problems occur. What are the problems that young people five in cities are caused by continued growth? What solutions do you suggest?

雅思写作大作文范文：

As major cities around the world are growing fast and many problems occur. What are the problems that young people five in cities are caused by continued growth? What solutions do you suggest?

There seems to be many problems to young people today in fast growing cities such as Beijing, London and Sydney etc. This essay will analyse some typical problems and offer possible solutions.

One evident problem is the poor behaviours of the young. Nowadays, young people are easily influenced by the questionable contents such as those violent images in the mass media and on the internet etc. For example, the youth have easy access to social networking websites on which they might come across inappropriate language and behaviours of adults without any expectation. Young people who crave attention may imitate these as a way to distinguish themselves.

I think the key factor to alleviating the situation is for teachers and parents to pay more attention to the development of young people's personality and morality instead of focusing on the academic performance only. In this way, students are more likely to become active and able members of the society another obvious problem is the increasing rate of youth unemployment. One of the most immediate effects of the problem is that those jobless graduates cannot find a way to earn a living; thus, being unable to support themselves and their families or to cover the loans which they might have for their expensive education, creating much pressure on themselves and their families, both financially and psychologically. This is far from a personal or private problem but also an issue for society as a whole. When the rate of youth unemployment uses, it may increase the chance of social instability, for the jobless young people with resentment and disappointment may easily form gangs or groups to commit robbery or other more serious crimes.

An important thing concerning young graduates themselves should be taken into consideration to address this problem. They should be advised to adjust their expectations and embark on some seemingly more fundamental work, for example, jobs in the communities or rural areas. This may work efficiently to reduce the current unemployment rates.

2017年11月25日雅思写作Task1原创小作文范文

题目为：The diagram below describes how to change organic waste into garden fertilizers. Describe the process.以下为范文及范文解析

The flow chart illustrates the process by which organic waste are converted into garden manure.

It is noticeable that five stages are shown on the diagram. The processes begin with preparing equipment and end at spreading compost materials.

At the initial stage, a plastic container which is about two cubic meters can be used and the cover on the top of it should be kept sealed. Meanwhile, drilling some holes enables air to pass through the device. After that, waste materials including food, grass and newspaper are put into the container layer by layer, of which the depth is the same with 15 centimeters.

At the third stage in the process, the materials are mixed with moderate nitrogen and water is added to keep sufficient moisture before placing the container on hot weather condition. Then, gases escape from the holes after the device is heated by hot weather. Finally, six months later, compost ingredients and worms are produced into high-quality fertilizers which could be spread on gardens.字数 167 words

范文原创自小站叶瑜琪老师

3.高分表达

be converted into 转换成为

garden manure 花园肥料

It is noticeable that…… 显著的是..

At the initial stage 最开始阶段

After that 之后

layer by layer, 逐层

At the third stage in the process 第三阶段

are mixed with 被混合

high-quality fertilizers 优质肥料

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