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为实现自己的留学之梦，无数学生默默地在GRE考试中付出自己辛勤的汗水。所有GRE高分故事背后都有值得我们学习的GRE备考经验。相信这样的一个个GRE高分故事能够在你备考GRE考试的过程中送上一丝鼓励与指导。

之前写的我对作文的理解基本上是沿袭老师的理解。具体就是对于issue, 将抽象具体化，通过抓住关键词进行展开分析论证，结构基本上是平行的几段，而最近见过的一些作文，觉得除了这种写法外，自己写的角度和视野可以更高些，对题目采取折中的态度，正反各说一通，最后综合说一下，比如提建议的，就说说有没有更好的建议，比如因果类的，可能有些原因本身有问题，却让我们去论证这个原因是否能导致某种结果，我们正反说一下后可以谈谈自己对这种理由的认识，诸如此类，学会这样去分析题目，写作文，我觉得肯定给人一定有深度的感觉。

关于语言，我觉得首先最基本的要求就是写对句子，一句话要表达正确表达清晰，阅卷人才有兴趣看下去。比如时态，比如短语使用，比如动词和介词的搭配，比如单词拼写，比如单词的准确使用而不是牵强附会(不能为了使用一个高级单词而不择手段)。其次就是我们的词汇使用的变换，同一个单词，可能所有人都会用，但用得恰到好处就很难了，同一个意思，可能大多数人都会向某个单词，这个时候我们可不可以换个别的单词(也不能是太偏僻的单词)。再就是表达方式的变换，主动语态和被动语态的灵活使用，我们当然很反感每句话开头都是I怎么的怎么的，还有倒装句、虚拟语气以及独立主格结构等，这些句式的使用必将使文章增色不少，我们的句子会变长，而不是简单讲状语叠加和谓语并列。

关于结构上，大部分作文的开头是first，second，third等等序数词或者连接词。其实我们学过更多的，多储备些，适当地灵活使用是很好的。

在准备的前期，当然不必要苛求自己在规定的时间内完成一篇作文，每个句子自己都可以好好琢磨下，像上面提到的，或许我们不习惯，但坚持训练十来天，相信会习惯的，实在不习惯就可以自己在写作文之前做些句子翻译练习，汉译英，然后跟人家好的翻译对照，练习一些天，也会好很多的。

语言关过了，之后的作文练习就会好很多了，就是学会思维发散和逻辑，总之就是能说出话，我想每个题目我们都应该熟悉，遇到了能说个一二三来，想不出来的查相关话题的素材，与人交流，坚决弄明白，而不要闭门造车。

最后再次建议写作文一定要修改，最好给别人修改，实在没人自己也要反复读反复酝酿，修改单词拼写错误语法错误，变换句式，查找思维漏洞。

GRE issue写作优秀实例：自我定位

题目：

It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.

如果我们要定位自己最重要是要定位自己所处的社会团体。

正文：

How we human being define ourselves has being one of the most important and basic philosophic questions ever since the ancient Greek philosophy period, which seems even more confusing and mysterious in this era of rapid social and technological changes leading to increasing complexity in both personal life and social environment.The title statement considers "our identification with social groups" the primary element to our self-identification. However, in my opinion, the dual quality of both individuality and sociality of human being calls for a balance in which there is not only social identification but also individual identification within the process of one's self-identification.

Social identification is necessary because everyone lives in a certain social environment, and it is from this social environment that we learn the behavior norms,form the outlook of value, and find the direction of our lives. As Karl Marx, the great German philosopher illustrated brilliantly (and I paragraph), which he regarded as the main key in his whole philosophic system," Human being is a kind of social animal, the essential of a human being is a synthesis of all his or her social relationships." That means, every person acts as different social roles in different time and to different object. As to a man, for example, he is son, husband and father in his family, he is teacher to his students, and also he is a fan of the New York Nicks when he watches the basketball match in the stadium. The process of enjoying right as well as fulfilling incumbency of every role is just the process for one to form his or her integrated human definition. So, undoubtedly, social identification is unavoidable in human self-identification.

Simply put, without being set in some certain social environment, one cannot be properly defined. The best example to this is the wolf-girl found in Amazon forest, who was the only survivor of a severe airplane accident and was brought up by a group of wolfs. The wolf-girl had no psychological characteristics of mankind, she is afraid of staying together with others, cannot communicate with others. Even in physical points,she was more similar with a wolf rather than a human, she stepped with her all fours and ate raw meat. Obviously, one who is of no sociality like a wolf-girl cannot be defined as a real human being.

On the contrary, however, over social identification leads to an assimilation in the whole society, which is in a sense harmful to social development and will probably prevent people from making clear some personalities hiding deeply in one's spiritual world, which is of equal importance in people's self-identification as sociality. Not all teachers are supposed to be kind and affable, some students need a stricter one. Not all employees are supposed to be precise and conservative, some employers prefer a more energetic and adventurous one. The attempt to form people in the same shape was proved a big error and a destructive calamity to the society both in pre-U.S.S.R.under the Stalin's administration and in China in 1970's. To sum up, as mentioned in the famous movie "Legend of the fall", no one can refuse to listen to the voice from his or her own heart, the self-identification without individuality is not an integrated one.

Without social identification, one can not find the origin from which his sense of value,social norms and life plan was drawn, without looking for some inborn characteristics within oneself, one will miss the important part which different him(her)self from others in the society. So while self-definition necessitates sociality, individuality is equally important. Only can a perfect combination of these two aspects lead to a correct definition of human being.

GRE issue写作优秀实例：国家领土

题目：

Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people.

政府应该保留国家领土中公共拥有的荒凉地区，即使这些地区往往人迹罕至。

正文：

Conflicts between prolonging human existence and solving current societal problem lie in governmental issues consistently. In order to keep biological diversity and natural balance, it places emphasis on environmental preservation which includes issues on wilderness areas. Insofar as protecting such areas permits a more comfortable survival of offspring I concede the necessity of preservation. However, when the nation is short of economical and political self-sufficient ability and current issues abound in number, government would set higher priority to at hand problems.

Preservation of wilderness areas conducted by government assures an effective method of providing descendants access to comfortable prospective nature system.Creatures, directly or indirectly instrumental for people, suffered from an escalated scale of extinction as a result of human industrialization. Moreover, along with rapidly accruing population, startling developing technologies and, perhaps most important of all, continuously inflating human desire the size and amounts of such areas shrank gravely over periods. Gradually appearing phenomena revealed threats of disastrous consequences tomorrow. Scarcity of plants with photosynthesis mechanism increase CO2 in atmosphere and therefore resulting in global warming trends which molten sea ice to water and has inundated some of the territory, for example. Awareness of some people in the leading position calls for governmental policies that protect environment from being excessively trampled by human behavior. To protect wilderness areas by forces of government is one of the available and effective measures. Creatures there could afford a free landscape and secure surrounding to grow and rear offspring.Possibly, certain kinds of rare species would be preserved from extinction.

However, a government takes responsibilities not primarily for the moral justice but for well-being of populace and strength of the nation as a whole. Once the protection of such areas require too much economical or personnel support, the priority needs confirmation. Resources of any government are limited, and deficit occurs frequently even if it places little emphasis on such relatively marginal issues. This does not entail eschewing from accountability for destiny of prospective citizens or human beings altogether. It means concern for being responsible for its living residents to guarantee the advent of prospective society. Can a population which suffered and is suffering from mass starvation, unemployment and destructive warfare but focused on symbiosis relationship with other species exist long? In this sense, human needs to be somewhat selfish rather than completely generous at the risk of self sacrificing.

Granted that preservation of wilderness areas validate in allowing biological diversity and better natural environmental situation for our progeny, it is likely that we can not satisfy them in light of the decline in human evolution. Had our predecessors intensively focused in preservation and distributed much more financial budgets to these areas rather than they did exploit Alaska for petroleum, we would not reproduce so many instruments that facilitate us in daily life and communication and make realization of genetic structure in ourselves possible. Such case holds true to whom live after us. Although by concentrating more on technological and economical development harms environment in future, we may have worked out solutions such as cloning disappeared species, recreating adaptable climate and colonizing to other planets. After all, purposes of all policies, no matter protecting the environment or reinforcing economical and technological strength, serve ultimately to the well-being of human.

To an extreme extent, without effective resorts to reduce the birth rate, which means persistent enlarging of population, government may take measures exploiting such areas for residence rather than preserve them originally looking. After all, it would be nonsense to afford others' benefits until we substantiated ourselves. Admittedly, wild animals and plants are there to stay and compete much less than they did, and such behavior robbing their last residence could be regarded as cruel. Yet, we may distinguish which is crueler comparing with depriving the right of survival from our fellow. The nature had performed its principle: the one who adapt less will be eliminated.

In summary, we have moral responsibility to preserve wilderness areas for a brighter future and circumstance for our descendents. However, sometimes government has to lay down such idea in order to avoid jeopardize in domestic crisis. In addition, once needed, to meet the needs for survival of its citizens, the government ought to make alternatives of exploiting rather than preservation.

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